Is television good or bad?

In this generation, there are television sets almost everywhere.
However, did you ever think about why there are television sets all around?
 Even though the television is not absolutely necessary, why it is surronding us?
That's because of two powerful reasons.
 It distracts people and many people actually earn money by using it.
Therefore there are two main problems, too.
One is that it might cause poisonous addiction and another is that it makes people violent and unhealthy.
Now I'll explain about these.

Firstly, watching television makes people insane.
There are lots fo cases that support the idea of television does harm.
There are some cases that it damages people's brain and some cases show that it makes people not very creative and can't concentrate well.
Moreover there are a few countries that are banning to have televisions in the houses who have babies.
This means exactly the one thing-that television is not really necessary but harmful for people.

Secondly the television makes people violent and unhealthy.
It is scientifically proved that electromagnetic waves are affectable to people, especially for children.
The electromagnetic waves are coming out from the television so it's not good for your health to watch TV.
Moreover you';; become fat if you watch too much TV because you won't exercise.
Also it makes people violent because TV shows people lots of violence and it really affects people's thoughts.

In conclusion, the television is not necessary and affect us in bad ways.
Watching it makes us go mad and weaker.
Moreover it makes us violent, too.
Therefore the televison is not  very nice thing to be with.

Challenge

Challenge is not mandatory but nessary experience for us.
Many ordinary people don't want to challenge something at the very first time.
However maybe I am an extraordinary person.
I like challenging very much and one of my most challenging stories is that about climbing Mt.Jiri.
I thought I would be able to challege and test my limits.
Also I could feel the fresh air and see the beautiful sky with lots of stars in Mt.Jiri.

Firstly, by climbing Mt.Jiri I could test my limits and improve myself both physically and mentally.
It made me realy tired and exhausted to climb such a mountain but I went out of from my fatigue(or exhaustion) by tolerating and putting up with these kinds of stress.
As the time past, I got better and better in walking in such a rocky path and going up and down.
Physically my body was quite tired and mentally I got stress sometimes.
But eventually I could know how to overcome these.

Secondly, I'm going to let you know about the challenge I made.
In my elementry school, we could choose a place go for the graduational trip out of five places.
Although most of my friends and more than half of my classmates went to Gangwondo for the trip, I chose Mt.Jiri because of several reasons such as I told you about before.
It was surely a difficult choice for me because if I would choose Mt.Jiri I wll be too lonely.
My friends tried to persuade me to go to Gangwondo so they said to me that graduation trip is for playing with the friends and make good memory with them.
Neverthless about what my friends told me I chose Mt. Jiri.

Lastly I learned about perseverance and became confident.
I needed lots of patience to climb up the mountain so even if I felt like the mountanin  was endless, it wasn't.
It took little bit of much time but it ended somehow so I required patience to climb up all the way to the top and then to the bottom.
Therefore I could learn about the perseverence and experienced perseverence easily and naturally.
In addition, I got comfident because maybe for some people who climb the mountain  might say "Oh, it's not that big thing" but for me it was a great achievement to climb the third highest mountain in my country, Korea..

In conclusion, I made an attept on myself, became comfident and learned endureness by climbing the Mt.Jiri.
Moreover, I made a great memory even though I couldn't be with my friends, so that the memory will shine in my heart forever.

About me

 Hello, reader. I'm Susie and I'm going to introduce myself for you.
If you want to know about me, you can know about me by reading this essay.
There are some secrets that I have inside, and now I'll tell you about it.

 First of all, I have so many dreams that are uncountable.
I wish I could be a lawyer, prosecutor,  judge, writer, reporter, politician, professor, environmental engineer,etc.
I want to be pretty, intelligent, eloquent, focused.
I hope the earth become fresh, clean and peaceful.
I came to the camp because of my dreams, too.

 Secondly, I like reading books and Taekwondo.
Reading books makes me really comfortable and it makes me very happy.
I could learn and feel many things by books. I could get lots of knowledge by reading specialty publications and I could learn many emotions ,feelings and expressions.
Doing Taekwondo is like a brief for me. It might be strange for you that a girl likes doing Taekwondo but it helps me to become healthy and to get rid of the stresses.
Even though I'm not good at Taekwondo very well because I'm not flexible, I like to do Taekwondo.

 Finally, I will introduce about my family.
My family is four. Mother, father, me and my younger sister.
My mother is a homemaker. She takes care of my families and the house.
She is so kind and gentle except sometimes when she gets mad.
My father works at a company and he is diligent.
He likes playing golf a lot.
My younger sister is very cute even though she is tall.
She is nice to many people and she plays flute well.

 In conclusion, I have many dreams, I like reading books and Taekwondo.
Moreover, I told you about my family before.
Thank you for reading my essay.